The reading and the lecture are both about importance psychology in our life. The author of the reading feels that psychology studies behaviour between people and relationships between them.Also, the lecturer confirms this, however, the author of the article claims that psychology is natural science. In contrast, the lecturer argues with this point. The lecturer claims that psychology is social science since this science studies the relationships between individuals and related with mind and behaviour people. Accordingly the lecture, the lecturer mentions that mental activity, therefore, psychology it is social science.
Secondly, the author of the reading suggest thet underlying method of psychology is objectively confirmed facts and the scientific methods. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this view. He mentions that psychology is based on the subject phenomena. Besides, the fundamental methods of psychology is quantuty and quality methods.
In the end, the author of the reading concern that some subfields suach as biology related with psychology, Despite of this fact, the lecturer disagree with him. He thought that primarily, psychology is related with social behaviour. Also, psychology study interaction between mental process and people behaviour.
- Some people think that in the modern world getting old is entirely bad Others however think that life of elderly in the modern world is much better than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your opinion 77
- Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health 60
- If you could go back to some time and place in the past when and where would you go Why Use specific reasons and details to support your choice 65
- Psychology is a natural science that descrebies and explains the psychological and sensory aspects of human behavior It studies the causes conditions and immediate consequences of sensations and emotions Psychologists view the human mind as a function of 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 188.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8085106383 5.08290768461 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79198069106 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 145.348785872 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5845879407 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166377504406 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739393329774 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450517564205 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119058312422 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329889354959 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.2367328918 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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