Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Moving abroad can be difficult for almost everyone because of various troubles they have to deal with everyday. Therefore, it is agree that living out of the country leads to social problems and practical problems but it is possible to overcome. Looking over the social relationships and the personal habits and yet trying to adapt the new life will prove it.
To begin with, people who live abroad have to deal with a new social environment and get familiar with the strange habitude. They live among a group of people who are distinct from them in many aspects such as language, culture and lifestyle. A situation when one struggles in adapting while living in a foreign country is called cultural shock, this exists in 6 months in average. This means that people generally need 6 months to make friends and get acquainted to a new culture. On the other hand, immigrants have to cope with serious changes in habits. They ought to acclimatize to a new weather which is sometime totally opposite to their country. In short, relocating in a foreign country results in many difficulties on social and practical trouble.
However, if immigrants can get over the hardest stage, they will integrate easily to their new home. Numerous of them struggle with their new life to such a degree that they decided to return. Despite that, many have succeeded as a result of a maximum trying process. Therefore, understanding the stages and not giving up are necessary to the adaptation.
In conclusion, relocating abroad would not be simple as traveling. Thus, to get over the strain of social environment and changing habitude, people should try to get familiar with others so that they can integrate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...various troubles they have to deal with everyday. Therefore, it is agree that living out...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...to deal with everyday. Therefore, it is agree that living out of the country leads to...
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Line 5, column 696, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
... short, relocating in a foreign country results in many difficulties on social and prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66028774967 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9155208047 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184879461983 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610022485196 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527945881006 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109088647487 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599943435627 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.