Environmental problems ore loo big for individual countries and individual persons for address. ln other words, we hove reached a stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Ever-increasing environment related problems are the gravest international concerns, nowadays. Some experts believe that initiatives at countries or personal level are not effective anymore, and international community need to intervene for safeguarding environment. However, I personally disagree as groundwork for this problem still requires efforts at state and personal level.
State, to begin with, need to start new initiatives for prohibitive actions against deteriorating environment. Aggressive infrastructure development can lead to environmental destruction in developing countries and It is state’s duty to maintain proper pollution checks in such cases. Additionally, government should also come up with the policies and initiatives that focus on raising awareness about importance of well-being of the natural habitat. ‘Swach Bharat Abhiyan’ is one such example, this policy was introduced by Government of India in the year 2018 to improve cleanliness in the country.
Citizens perhaps have the second most crucial role to play after country in preserving surroundings. People have the access to their home where governments can not intervene and it becomes the responsibility of the family to keep hygiene at their homes, and also assure that the garbage accumulated at home is not degrading local environment. They should have setup for recycling setup in the house which will help reducing overall waste generation per house. Finally, as a responsible citizen we ought to maintain cleanliness at public sites such as community parks, in the neighborhood.
It might be true that pressure exerted from international stages such as the U.N. might help speeding up the prohibitive actions at nation level, however ground work still needs to be done by local authorities or the public.
Overall, it appears that organizations operating internationally may perhaps be able to build a certain amount of pressure on nations with degraded environmental conditions however most of the patch work for fixing this problem will still be done by countrymen or the country itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...bove pre-industrial levels. All nations are realizing that climate change is one of the great...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...d by adding a very small amount in each months electricity bill for about a year. ln a...
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Suggestion: Ln
...nths electricity bill for about a year. ln about 100 cities, the streetlights have...
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Suggestion: as well
...ed to make the initial heavy investment also. Although the international and n...
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Suggestion: Ln
... individual citizens were not involved. ln a world of six billion people, if every...
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Suggestion:
...n solving the problem of environment. Summing up, individual citizens cannot s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14397905759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99939889494 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573298429319 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3609287759 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223007605813 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641385564098 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744798558125 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129260758101 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731954507997 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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