Adults do very less exercise these days.
Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and World Cup tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
In recent times it is observed that people, in their adultery, are generally lazy and they are not very fond of physical exercise. Some of us propose that international sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can be leveraged to promote exercise and healthy lifestyle while others claim that there are other, more efficient and effective, means available. The essay will discuss both the views and reach a logical conclusion.
Those who support the idea of achieving health awareness in adults with the help of sports events claim that adult viewership can be encouraged with the use of a special segment in the game telecast. This segment will stress upon the urgency of physical workout in this age full of stress ranging from personal to work-related. Supporters also point to the evidence found in FIFA CUP 2016 where the FIFA council successfully implemented one such program which encouraged a large segment of the European adult population to go for a walk daily, as per an official report. Furthermore, supporters of this idea also believe that International events, such as World Leagues have the widest outreach so masses can be informed and educated about how crucial health is especially in adult age using these events.
Critics, however, argue that initiatives by State and private employers have better potential than sporting events to encourage adults for exercise. They say that state-owned facilities such as community parks, swimming pool in the neighbourhood are the best motivation of adults to spend their leisure time in those amenities, owing to reasonable rates for offering and distance from home. Another much effective promotion of heathy lifestyle and regular workout could be health initiatives for workers by employer at workplace. By this, they mean that employer should arrange regular health-related programs such as Yoga sessions and adults have the chance to benefit from these organized events.
In conclusion, it can be summarised that world level sporting events can certainly reach out to a larger set of audience and may perhaps be able to encourage adult however a majority of people argue initiatives at state and employer level can be more productive due to a number of reasons. In my opinion, later technique can be promising as it easy to engage and encourage adults in a better way at lower levels such as workplace or a state rather than a global platform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1435768262 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75110946998 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554156171285 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7700722641 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.076923077 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5384615385 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286312261532 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935062365852 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655402415267 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168103147193 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301827291112 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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