Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In civilized and modernized societies, attention to the happening around the word has been always among primary concerns of human beings' lives. Today it is axiomatic that people usually elapse some times of their daily lives on listening and finding the news about the world even in issue which not affect their lives. A plethora of people possess the conviction that it is better for searching and paying some attention to the happening all around the word, whereas others might hold the opposite view. I firmly endorse the former conviction instead of the latter one. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the happenings and news will improve human's knowledge about lots of aspects of life and teach them how to deal with them in similar situations. For instance, nowadays United States proposes some sanctions on Iran and lead to several problems such as economic and social one. These problems not only does not cause to make Iran as a weak country, but also leads to be independent and self-producer country. Now other countries can learn more about sanctions and some ways to cope with it.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that these news will escalate the recognition of other governments' behavior or some scientists about a couple of issues. For example, in my experience for one of my projects which was about rehabilitating the structures after earthquake, I have learned a plenty of information from the last earthquake which had happened 10 years ago and i used them in that project perfectly.
To put it in briefly, all the enumerated reasons lead us to the conclusion that catching the information about the happenings around the world is an important issue which is so useful in life. However a paramount issue that must be mentioned is that this can not be used as a prescription for everybody and some counter examples might exist, which are not mentioned above. Therefore some surveys and statistical studies might lead to answer this question more precisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0056022409 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67470189732 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565826330532 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4870664384 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15279649495 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502218195114 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500176100787 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089514906496 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236091470828 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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