tpo 40
The material discusses the possibility of a permanet human to live on Venus plant.While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely Venus atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth's pressure. Next, there are no oxygen or water sources on Venus' surface. Fianlly, Veuns has thick clouds that refect about 60% of the sunlight that reaches its surface.
Conversely, the lecture challenges the points, one specific contradiction is all the spacecrafts that reach Venus surface will float 50 kilograms above its surface, where the atmospheric pressure is equal to the pressure on the Earth so nothing will be crushed. In addition to that, Venus atmosphere is a combined of cardon dioxide and sulfuric acid, so people could use chemical procedure to produce water and oxygen and it is necessary to be imported. One final point, Venus' atmosphere cloud is 30 kilograms from its surfuace; furthermore, it is not very thick, so considerable amount of sunlight could reach its surface. Moreover, solar cells could be use to collect direct sunlight and also the reflected one; so it could produce suffecient amount of electricity, which is more than enough to power a station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...a permanet human to live on Venus plant.While the reading looks at the topic from one...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...surface. Moreover, solar cells could be use to collect direct sunlight and also the...
^^^
Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...surface. Moreover, solar cells could be use to collect direct sunlight and also the...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26291079812 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77671649809 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4586635645 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.125 110.228320801 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06452816374 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358928375964 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164063135137 0.0996497079465 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457012914529 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227254301658 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920206319161 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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