Nowadays, business training courses and meetings seem to be prevalently held via
the internet. Even though there might be some downsides to this phenomenon, I
believe they are likely to be eclipsed by its benefits.
The first disadvantage arising from the online business meeting is that it might disturb
people’s life. To this end, a vast number of people make a living by providing
services, such as food catering, for customary business meetings. In, if online
business meeting supplants the typical ones, these services lose their clientele and
therefore forced to make countless workforce redundant. Additionally, this online
pattern might plague human’ social skills. Mankind’s soft skills, indeed, entails
individuals daily and face-to-face encounters, helping them boost their interpersonal
relationships. Devoid of natural human feeling, online courses are to deprive people
of physical contacts, thus impeding them from acquiring beneficial social skills.
However, I believe rewards reaped of online business educational courses or
meetings are of more significance. Firstly, it mitigates noise and air pollution as
myriads of vehicles would be off the streets. In fact, having arranged their meetings
via online services, the business person would leave their cars resting in a favor online
meetings, hence a substantial drop in the amount of detrimental noise and air pollutions.
Moreover, with the aid of online media, managers are now availing themselves of
adept experts in various place even foreign nations. Lacking in skilled instructor in
their locality, the employer actually might suffer from an unskilled workforce. However,
employing online services, they could find educators apt for their business courses,
enabling their staff to enjoy a more heightened intellect for their business life.
In conclusion, from my prospective, the merits of holding business training courses
and meetings outstrip its demerits, as they would result in fewer cars on the street and
less pollution as well as more availability of online business professionals.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
- Task 2 It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks Do you agree or disagree with this statement 95
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do you advantages of new development outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86173633441 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93594311863 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5159470863 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.533333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170711706012 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634936055613 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602058658694 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514179405793 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563832940194 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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