Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A heat controversy has arisen as to whether the development of international transaction and cross culture brings merits or demerits. Ahead of my stand, there are many considerations should be put on such issue.
To begin with, it cannot be denied the positive effects of international trade to each nation. Initially, productivity will be improve to certain extent due to the fact that country needs qualified products to exchange with others. Therefore, job opportunities will not be in shortage, and this generally improves the economy as well. For example, ever since Vietnam was allowed to export some frozen food to the European market, the problems regarding job demand are solved partially, more and more qualified products are produced, exported and sold. Furthermore, as countries begin to exchange their culture with each others, the gap between nations may be eliminated. As a result of that, there may not have any war.
On the flip side, the trend also has negative impact on some of the country’s domestic industries. Almost youngsters prefer watching Hollywood blockbuster such as Avengers or Iron Man rather than the local film or TV shows. For instance, recently, a local film made by a Vietnamese director has to call for an emergency as the film is not enjoy by the majority and it may lead to bankrupt. this is not the only case where domestic films are not being favoured by the young generations, and yet, it is not easy to keep natural identities with such preference. Another disadvantage can be conclude in this is the massive immigration of people. Citizens may loose the root in the process of adopting new habits.
In conclusion, I deem that both the advantages and disadvantages of the issue are counterbalance, so it is critical that countries should try to minor the disadvantages as much as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
A heat controversy has arisen as to whether the development of international transa...
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Message: "needs qualified" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'qualifiing' or 'to be qualified'.
Suggestion: qualifiing; to be qualified
...tent due to the fact that country needs qualified products to exchange with others. There...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., the trend also has negative impact on some of the country's domestic industries. Alm...
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Line 9, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...all for an emergency as the film is not enjoy by the majority and it may lead to bank...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e majority and it may lead to bankrupt. this is not the only case where domestic fil...
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Line 9, column 661, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ive immigration of people. Citizens may loose the root in the process of adopting new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99610783978 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7555825374 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980421827296 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315017599767 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381160885837 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564493826607 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176605414634 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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