Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
There are highly demanded of being vegetarian and remove meat from our diet. It is classified that people should have a vegetarian diet for a healthy life.
To begin with, a vegetarian diet is healthier and cheaper than a diet that has meat. If people eat a hamburger every day, it will increase of being overweight. In addition, rising cattle in factory farm conditions are very cruel. It also meat production causes more emissions than transportation. Rising animals need a huge amount of water, such as it uses 100 times the amount of water than vegetable production.
On the other hand, the vegetarian diet is not a balanced diet because there is no study prove that eating a vegetarian diet alone would be much healthy. There are some nutrients are best absorbed from meat as a source of necessary mineral of our diet such as iron. Also, there some people prefer to eat all different kind of meat such as beef, chickens, and fish, so it should cover the demanding meat production for human purposes. We can cut down meat production consumption and having a balanced diet has both meat and vegetables. To avoid the bad conditions of animals, the government should put restrictive rules for these factory farms.
In conclusion, having a diet deposed basically on vegetables might not enough have balanced on our diet. So, I strongly believe that have an equal amount of meat and vegetables would be more suitable and healthy too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...would be more suitable and healthy too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88617886179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65296150976 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.107822078 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279453010201 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102827270394 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691195643295 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187584149184 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552571626448 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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