Describe a custom from your country that would you like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice.
For many years, one of the essential concerns of all communities has related to customs as well as attitudes of local people toward them. It is crystal clear that virtually all societies, all around the world have their unique, fantastic, and helpful customs are nothing but so precious, for we would be able to obtain quite a bit useful information by virtue of various tradition. Were I given the opportunity to introduce one of my county’s customs, I would like to talk about “ Fasting” which is a religious costume that not only my countrymen but also all the Muslim all over the world follow. I believe that “Fast” is extremely invaluable and it is worth trying because of many merits which I am going to elaborate hereunder.
To begin with, Fasting is a religious deed that people willingly do not eat and drink anything during a specific period of day in Ramedan, one of the famous Arabic months. Muslim people are to refrain from drinking and eating, and in return, they would take some advantages. It is also worth mentioning that Fasting is not only abstaining from eating and drinking, but the individuals must not smoke anything, not take any drugs, and above all, not commit any bad behavior such as lying and gossiping either. Otherwise, they assume that their Fast is not accepted by God and have to repeat the custom. The first advantage of taking Fast is associated with physical as well as mental health. By doing so, since the people do not enter anything in their bodies for a short time, about 12 hours, though it could be varied by different seasons, their digestive systems have time to rest, resulting in reviving after working in other 11 months constantly. In addition, because they are not permitted to do anything wrong, they could experience a great feeling and ease their minds during this time. The more human beings avoid committing vice, the more they are likely to enjoy the very moments.
Secondly, by taking fast, Moslems can understand poor people very well. In other words, when people experience a similar condition, they can have a better sympathy for all the people who are in desperate need of food and even water. As a result, they would gain exemplary willpower to help such people as much as they afford.
In conclusion, I would suggest taking Fast to all people who are willing to understand the reality vividly. I think taking Fast is worth trying and that is not much tough so that a person could not tolerate not to eat or drink just for a short while. Nevertheless, we are to be careful that not all people have the right to take Fast; indeed, some vulnerable ones like the sick have no right to do so.
- Some people think that the government should spend more money on the education of adults, while others believe that the education of children carries more importance. Which opinion do you advocate? 90
- Describe a custom from your country that would you like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s like the sick have no right to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76709401709 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5667178614 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523504273504 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0089066033 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109567827942 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402704461814 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333591291963 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719783174951 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169128126301 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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