Sports stars are paid too much for what they do?
Update, throughout the world more and more countries are spending certain of their budget to improve some popular sports such as football or boxing. Some argue that champions are well paid for what they do. I completely disagree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples. Firstly, most well-known sportsmen are suited for getting valuable payment. For instance, many sport stars such as Cristiano, Messes devoted their entire life for football even their desire and thought. In other words, doing best is not so easy. It is gets more power and time, then I believe it needs pay better. Another reason why I disagree with too much paid for sportsmen is that salesperson ' s prize or pride is pride of the government. As a famous president says: "There is no any branch can develope the country as a sport " . Some countries earn money by exchanging sport players. Football player is an example. They often play other teams for high price.
On the other hand, there is an argument that it does not take so much money for the sportsmen to train or participating in sports competitions.Many sports participants have extra money or homes. As a result, they give off the sport some time later because of having enough means.
In conclusion, although it is a common believe that spending much money is a way for sportsmen to have pleasure, I believe it is too efficient not only sports players but the government is also concerned with them. Personally I think sports person should get much.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82824427481 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61617958305 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1113217685 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390280848056 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107136686384 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948635322296 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239308651488 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069893933914 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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