It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in everyday life, instead of recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened and how to deal with this issue?
THe environmental issue has long been discussed for decades. However, people tend to dispose products more frequently. There are several reasons that should be responsible for this phenomenon
The proliferation of disposable products can be largely attributed to the modern lifestyle and the lack of awareness towards environmental protection. To begin with, the consumption of take-away food should be held responsible for the use of plastic bags and paper, such as take-away containers. This is particularly true in CBD areas, where business people habitually throw-away food packaging rather tha...
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Sentence: Secondly, the improvement of productivity and technology has reduced the productions costs substaintially, allowing people to purchase and upgrade household appliances more regularly.
Error: substaintially Suggestion: substantially
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