People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Nowadays, mobs prefer to live in larger cities for better life style, besides of that people face many problems on the daily basis. Immigrate to some small cities or rural area will be good idea for the government to encourage the local mobs.
To begin with, there are serval difficulties that mobs face during live in urban areas. Firstly, the expenses of living in urban ares are too high. Like native mobs who live there have to pay high amount of money to live in-house and transport to move around and food to eat. Secondly, Chances of getting a job is also lower as compare to developing cities. Therefore, they need huge saving to back up themselves. Lastly, Pollution is also a major in these towns For example, the worn-out fuel from manufacture companies and vehicles cause serval diseases among the souls like lungs problems, etc. which cost a short life expectancy in human beings.
However, these problems can be solved by taking some measurement steps first government should implement some supportive policies in suburban to encourage local mobs to move there like improving transport facilities, moving colleges and universities to rural area . By doing all of this these policies will help natives to create a perfect to live in and workout.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is government’s responsibility to take care the health of local mobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95708154506 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64441530048 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643776824034 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1752023346 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25967231062 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716172965472 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607699703797 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135174470762 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689830874462 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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