A person you know is planning to move to your city town. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Since the few past decades, migration has always been a theme for human being. People has always tried to choose the best place of living that could easily fit their requirements and they be comfortable living there. However, some would rather to stay on the place that their ancestor was living. I personally think that my city have several benefits rather to thing they may not like, if a friend of wants to live in my city which I will explore in ensuing essay.
First and foremost, in the country that I and my countrymen are living in, we have had security trouble having a peaceful life. However, this case is a lot more different and my city is more stable & secure than other neighboring cities. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, when I traveled to Kabul, Afghanistan for some official works, I was noticing many tragic events. People of that city lost their beloved members of their family every day and they shadow of sad has kind of covered their peaceful life. When I walked in Kabul streets, I was really afraid and I was thinking that in any moments it is possible that a security event occur. Therefore, in the country that we are living security is a key factor for living in, thanks God we are secure enough and I highly recommend a friend of mine to come to live in our city.
Second, another key factor for earning a living is job. Fortunately, there are a lot more vacancies in my city and rate of unemployment is rare comparing to other parts of my country. In my city there more factories active that people are working there at night and day shifts. In fact, adjacency of my city in harbor is another significant way for creating more jobs. For instance, my uncle has traveled to Iran many times, in contrast of Iran, he could not only find great jobs for him, but also the jobs there were low paid. That even as he said they could hardly afford their monthly expenses.
Thirdly, there are fewer things that a friend my dislike about my cities. These are like not existing subways, motorways but in the long run, these are going to be solved. As the municipality of Herat asserts, all our subways are going to be completed in the next 10 years and our people can take them to major cities. He added that, by completing this people can save both time and money and they will be more convenient instead to taking busses.
As a conclusion, living in my city is a lot more beneficial that other major cities of my country. Security is ideal in my place to go to school, work, and travel and invest. Therefore, I highly recommend my friend to come to my city. Other than security, my city is economically developed and there are more jobs for men, women and even students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or cities. He added that, by completing this people can save both time and money and...
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Line 7, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re convenient instead to taking busses. As a conclusion, living in my city is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in contrast, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51209677419 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38956622845 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493951612903 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3032576401 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.52 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.84 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11398655217 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375354308913 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408907352807 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725602649458 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318855315597 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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