Nowadays Consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s life Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
There is no doubt that life across the whole world has increased the usage of the modern technology, education system and so as the Consumer goods. Life must move on along with pace of time and necessity for money and for the people to travel with such pace consumer goods are vital and important. Consumers goods can be classified as many such as Car, Bikes, Cycle, Furniture’s etc.
Admittedly Bikes are important for daily routine in people life which supports in travel in timely manner and freedom to go anywhere, anytime without any restrictions. The cost spent on this is also minimal and affordable. Also, every member of the family can access it knowing it how to drive and need not depend of anyone. The space needed for such consumer good is also minimal and one need not invest on building a separate garage or parking space.
When there are so many advantages in using bikes in people life no doubt there also disadvantages too which people are not aware of and do not consider it without knowing the consequences of it. When bikes meet with accident the chances of being deadare more and at times people loose legs, hands and sometime if its severe may even get affected by paralysis due to cut in veins during the accident. Bikes are too dangerous for kids specially when not known how to drive it. Also, bikes cannot be used all weather conditions specially during the rainy seasons and winter fall.
To conclude with my personal view of using the consumer goods if life, people should equally balance and know how to act accordingly considering both advantages and disadvantages. Also, the later one should be given importance for smooth run of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, may, so, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51279721061 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8066866656 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21254578345 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737840625925 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582598898189 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136996017322 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507279004154 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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