Advanced medical technology expands human life. Do you think it is a blessing or a curse?
Technology is boon for humans in the past few decades, especially medical technology and many discoveries in the medical field is saving lives around the globe. Medical Technology deals with discovering new technological devices and treatments using modern scientific concepts and theories.
This technology is so valuable that it is saving hundreds and thousands of creatures from disease and
injuries across the world.
Medical technology is surely a blessing to human life since it is evidently proved to save a human from
disease and major injuries by a quick diagnosis of the causes and degree of damage caused to human tissues.
In case of accidents, x-ray and scanning devices help to quickly scan the internal human organs, bones and
muscles with which treatment can be provided to the patients as quickly as possible. In case of disease, many advanced medical methods to analyze blood, urine and stool is in practice. These testing methods are very
effectively and accurately analysed with advanced medical devices and analysers.
Major life-threatening diseases like cancer and AIDS(acquired immunodeficiency syndrome), is still a challenge
to humans for the past few decades. Though few medical treatments that are technologically advanced can slow down
the death rate among humans diagnosed with these diseases, there is never a complete cure discovered yet in medical technology for such life-threatening diseases.
Surely the advanced medical technology is a blessing for humans and many creatures in this world. As far as medical technology is used in the right way with an ethical attitude, it will always remain as a blessing and not as a curse to humans and
other creatures in this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...is evidently proved to save a human from disease and major injuries by a quick di...
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...ans and other creatures in this world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40590405904 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97330891372 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516605166052 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3011958684 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.181818182 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 7.25397266985 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354321063748 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150273356496 0.0925447433944 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835281958246 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122500409587 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112068308169 0.0609392437508 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 74.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.0 Out of 90
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