Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one other?
Nowadays, no one can deny the fact that we gain many benefits from the technology specially that is the internet. There are more and more people using the internet for studing, working and comunication. The internet has contributed importantly to socioeconomic development from 1990s and it helps the people linking with each other in the worldwide, regardless of the geographic barriers.
First of all, there are some people argue that the internet provides fast, cheapest even free of charge ways of comunications. Back in the past between 1980 s to 1990s, before the internet has not grown yet. People used some ways of comunications such as writing letters and telephones ect. Wich cost them pretty large amounts of money and time. It took sevaral weeks or even months for arriving of their letters to the destination. But from 1990 when the internet has started to grown. The ways of comunication have changed. People used the email for comunication. It was simpler and faster than the old ways. In nowadays, people have smart phone, ipad, laptop ect. These devices are epuipped with software appications by the internet such as social network, viber, zalo that can receive and deliver a text massage at a click of button and no cost at all.
On the other hand, the internet has sevaral negative sides as well. The young people impose on the internet technology so much that become gradually autistic. Inspite of going out for interaction, they just lie on the bed with the smart phone in hands. Youtube chanel and facebook were used with many passive videos such as violence and depreved videos but that were supported by some youngsters.
In conclusion, I belive that the internet has so many advantages for our life. It really has made the world become smaller place to live in and it is a huge fund of knowledge if we know how to use it effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to socioeconomic development from 1990s and it helps the people linking with eac...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the cheapest'.
Suggestion: , the cheapest
...le argue that the internet provides fast, cheapest even free of charge ways of comunicatio...
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Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
...s simpler and faster than the old ways. In nowadays, people have smart phone, ipad, laptop ...
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Line 5, column 809, Rule ID: MASSAGE_MESSAGE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'message'?
Suggestion: message
...alo that can receive and deliver a text massage at a click of button and no cost at all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87460815047 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63414672762 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3638962733 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307765396115 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872359247034 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615566409635 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180229345672 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539274710475 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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