Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people
Do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals believe that the government should take responsibilities of the homeless and poor people. I agree that a nation should look after its retired and economically poor citizens. This essay will discuss the importance of aiding underprivileged people first and then the various ways of providing support to them.
Firstly, one of the government responsibility is to take care of its people. Unemployment has been a major issue around the globe, so, the government have a major role to play such as offering services like temporary housing and job placement for these people. In other words, it is the government who should take care of these dominated people when they suffer from unemployment. For example, a program was conducted by the UK government in the year 2015 which offered free accommodation to almost 50% of the homeless people.
Another point to consider is that there are different ways to help the poor people. That is to mean the government should implement policies to raise funds from the public in order to provide free education and housing for the jobless. Many of them are desperately in need of these programs and will eventually benefit a lot from it if implemented properly. For example, in 2017, a public organization called ‘Shelter for homeless association’ spent their whole year fund to build shelters for the underprivileged people.
In conclusion, the government should take action to make sure the homeless ones are receiving proper care as it is a major role that each and every government should fulfil.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16470588235 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05436074644 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6810718573 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214863039058 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906354956899 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845186295698 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152187266065 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717702588475 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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