Dear Mr Harris,
I am writing with respect to the recent adverts for vacancy at the head office. I would like to apply for the post of Web Master as this is what I currently do. However, I just gained admission to the university of California for a six-month advanced certification course on Web Technologies and it's implementation on different platforms.
Let me explain myself in details, the course will start on October 1st and will end by November 30 to be precise. I had intended to do the course online but I was made to understand that I will achieve more if I do on-site course as it is a practical based course with a two weeks internship in one of the prestigious companies that are already implementing the technology..
Meanwhile, I have already discussed with Miss Mary David,who usually stand-in for me anytime I am on vacation and she has promised to refer to me as soon as possible should any problem occur. I will make sure my phone is always switched on and close by. Secondly, I can always work online by connecting to the office intranet to fix any urgent issues.
Therefore, I am soliciting for your assistance as your are my immediate boss and would be in the best position to speak on my behalf to the management. Furthermore, the course will be of immense pro to the company, as it will keep us abreast of technology and will also help me in my career advancement.
Thanks for your usual support as I awaits your favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
OLUWUNMI Bajo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... are already implementing the technology.. Meanwhile, I have already discussed ...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...e already discussed with Miss Mary David,who usually stand-in for me anytime I am on...
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Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'await'
Suggestion: await
.... Thanks for your usual support as I awaits your favourable response. Yours sinc...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69172932331 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88534753005 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9318622 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189992473415 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723032750318 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597976223974 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104947319182 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642235737416 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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