You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear Priya,
Hope you are doing good.it has been a long time, we met each other.i am writing this letter to convey my joys with you since you are my bestie and well-wisher who always looks forward my growth in my life.i am glad to have such a wonderful soul in my life.well, recently we are shifted to new house which was bought by me through my savings. I think this would be the best achievement for me since I am striving for it a long time, as you knew.
Our new home is situated in the central area of the town in Abudhabi.it is an en suite building with 2 bedrooms with so many amenities.the kitchen is well-appointed with modular features. And, there is a place called beachfront arena which will be well suited for our chit-chat time. definitely, you will love this place.
Regarding the neighborhood, I think this place is full of people who are friendly in all aspects and they are always most welcome with their soft-spoken features.inspite of their caring, I think I am surrounding with showers of blessings with these neighbors.
I knew you are having a tight schedule with your business.but it is my pleasure to invite my good soul to visit my home.so plan your visit and intimate me about your arrival.we are awaiting to spend our time with you.come by this weekend and we will have a blast weekend in our new house.
lovingly.
Banu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Priya, Hope you are doing good.it has been a...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...has been a long time, we met each other.i am writing this letter to convey my joy...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ways looks forward my growth in my life.i am glad to have such a wonderful soul i...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for it a long time, as you knew. Our new home is situated in the central ...
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Line 9, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Definitely
... be well suited for our chit-chat time. definitely, you will love this place. Re...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...initely, you will love this place. Regarding the neighborhood, I think this...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f blessings with these neighbors. I knew you are having a tight schedule w...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lovingly
... a blast weekend in our new house. lovingly. Banu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6393442623 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70321294992 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.857607281 44.8134815571 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.714285714 76.5299724578 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 16.8248392259 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166444077805 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675610305457 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825554537878 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996263020198 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953476624165 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 8.37731958763 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.