More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Certainly ,nowadays urban areas become highly demanded place to live in as compare to past. Thereby many individuals are now moving towards cities to looking better lifestyle ; However some says that it is hard to stay in city-life. In upcoming paragraphs i will highlight the sorts of causes which make to difficult living in cities as well as what should be done for better urban life by authorities.
To commence with,there are an ample number of reasons which make to hard for people staying in cities and one of them is diseases. In other words,there are a lots of vehicles and industries which reduce highly chemical smoke and there is difficult to get fresh vegetables and fruits also. As a result,multitudes would face health problems such as skin problem,cancer,hair-falls,lung infection and some time they lose their mental ability. Moreover, another bad cause about shifting in cities is, more expensive. In modern places there are all thing work on electricity and after every two month they have to pay their all bills such as electricity bill ,water bill and gas bill which is hard to manage and sometimes these are out of their range .
On the contrary , administration should build parks and gardens in towns. In this type of ares it is hard to get fresh air and only parks and gardens preserve this thing. Due to this , persons will do curriculum activities and will live healthy lifestyle. In addition to this, high authorities should make a strict rules against factories. What i mean to is that . It is responsibility of government that any one would not built a industries in near the area of city . By this , industries will be built outside the town and people will stay away from any type of problem.
In conclusion, city life difficult because living in cities means say hello to diseases and out of budget. Government should be made rule on factories along with gardens are also necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91076923077 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00812244169 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.686393919 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248990160711 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074198154452 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879158865734 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168840215248 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110329978125 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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