An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In this present scenario , many education institutes are replacing books with give technical gadgets to learners which they can use in school for making assignments and take exams. I will not highlight only advantage of this trend but also will give disadvantages.
On the one hand , there are an ample number of using tablets and laptop computers in education sector and one of them is easy learning. In other words , these things offer variety of lessons by multimedia and students give more attention . As a result, they can grasp any topic related to their subject in short time . Moreover, using electronic gadgets are major benefit is enviroment degradation. What i mean to say is that for paper is made from trees. When trees are cut , temperature of earth is automatically increase and global warming produce. So, when books change by computers then nature will safe.
On the other hand , there are a plethora of merits when pupil use electronic gadgets daily life for making notes and assignments . It cut their ability of writing. Due to this , they would lose their handwriting skill. In addition to this , when tutee's would spend more time on electronic things for study it bad impact on their eyesight. Also , tablets and laptops received harmful rays which cause of diseases such as cancer,skill problem and they could lose their mental ability.
In conclusion , there are numerous positive of giving technology things such as it save enviroment and educators can learn easily ; however , it has some drawbacks on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09163346614 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6670997631 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3815473473 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22234567874 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608741444813 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498965005936 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115280639182 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768181147997 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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