An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In this present scenario, with the growth of education institutions,are giving electronic gadgets which replace the books ,assignments . also students can take exams on laptops computer . I will not highlight only advantage of this trend but also will give disadvantages.
On the one hand , there are an ample number of using tablets and laptop computers in education sector and one of them is easy learning. In other words , these things offer variety of lessons by multimedia and students give more attention . As a result, they can grasp any topic related to their subject in short time . Moreover, using electronic gadgets are major benefit is enviroment degradation. What i mean to say is that for paper is made from trees. When trees are cut , temperature of earth is automatically increase and global warming produce. So, when books change by computers then nature will safe.
On the other hand , there are a plethora of merits when pupil use electronic gadgets daily life for making notes and assignments . It cut their ability of writing. Due to this , they would lose their handwriting skill. In addition to this , when tutee's would spend more time on electronic things for study it bad impact on their eyesight. Also , tablets and laptops received harmful rays which cause of diseases such as cancer,skill problem and they could lose their mental ability.
In conclusion , there are numerous positive of giving technology things such as it save enviroment and educators can learn easily ; however , it has some drawbacks on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16465863454 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7673403541 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6910842443 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213485875949 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630481866434 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505213212952 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113896580173 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755320237579 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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