Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
There is no doubt that parents are the most important angle in children's growth. It goes without saying that in today's sophisticated world where we live in, due to the complexity of lives, people are more busy than before and they do not have enough time to spend with their beloved. For a long time, the way that parents should devote their free time with their childeren has been a contoversial issue in all countries around the globe,. Many communities have been debating whether the best aproach for parents to exploit their time with their kids is to play with them or by helping them in their school homework's. I firmly endorse and prefer the first attitude instead of the later one. The reasons substantiating my viewpoint are investigated in the following essay.
The first point to be mentioned is that childeren's schooljobs are their own responsibility, even it is nice that parents help them somehow; but, it would not become like a habit for kids. Beside, children should do their works before their parent come home and they are not supposed to wait to do their assignments that late. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was at elementary school, my parent's both had job. My mom was so carefull and concerned about me and my brother's homeworks. Therefore, she spent most of her time at home in the evening to help us to finish our works. After a while it became like a ritual for me and my brother to wait until our mom was back from work, then we started to do our schooltasks.
Alongside the elaborated reason above, another idea that is noteworthy to consider is that it is better for parents to spend their time at home correlated to fun and enjoyable activities such as cooking with their kids or playing board games with them. For instance, when I was young, I prefered to to hangout with my parents rather than doing other stuffs such as schoolworks.
As shown above, taking all the reasons and points into account, it is my firm belief that parents must devote their time playing with their children. This is because kids should know that their schoolwork is their own job and because if parent hanging out with their children in the way that is not related to the works they have to do, it will have a greater impression on kids and strenghten the love between the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67317073171 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5083513099 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2249766413 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.705882353 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32002751634 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983462913184 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818878944075 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219407938772 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698055039007 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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