Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?
It has been seen that there are drastic change in the dynamics of working style from past many years. Nowadays a person has to travel more and visit more places regarding work. Not only in the private sector but also in the government sector,one has to travel for earning and to get certain wages or appreciation in terms of incentives and promotion. People could not clearly found that is this trend have more advantages or disadvantages. In my perception this provides more advantages rather then disadvantages
To begin with, travelling provides exposure.One can replete all his/her fascination...
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People could not clearly found that is this trend have more advantages or disadvantages
People could not clearly found whether this trend has more advantages or disadvantages
that one consider his/her work as
that one considers his/her work as
The youth have penchant of travelling
The youths have penchant of travelling
that young professional are ready to work
that young professionals are ready to work
as travelling a compulsion and dis not enjoyed moving from places to places.
as travelling is a compulsion and does not enjoyed moving from places to places.
The personal life is somehow get ignored by
The personal life is somehow getting ignored by
Sentence: The mere disadvantage is that one could not spend quality time his/her family and spend most of time travelling for office work .
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
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Sentence: Moreover,one must be ready for each and every situation and must be flexible enough to work outside his/her comfort zone in a way that one can cross the certain threshold and fetch a fruitfull life from his/her hard work but some assert as travelling a compulsion and dis not enjoyed moving from places to places.
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Error: fruitfull Suggestion: fruitful
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'The personal life is somehow get ignored by which gives immense displeasure to an individual and also some people also complain about the working hours as most people are not satisfied by the incentives and the wages they got after working for so long so these are the prime reasons that hinders in the job satisfaction and creates friction between company and a employee. '
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