the data shows the average household in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that was consisted from four exact categories and others.And the biggest usage was housing.
the data showed that the highest percentage in japan was other goods and services, it was not explained about other goods and services, and it was 29% average household.the second greatest was food it was 24%.And then Japanese country has the third usage, it was housing whose value is 21%.Overtaken by transport whic has 20%.While the smallest one was health care, it was really small in Japanese country.
While in malaysian country the most usage was housing it was 34%, very hight and different from japan whose housing just 21%.and the food was the largest after housing, it was 27%.the next supreme of which was other goods and services which have value 26%.followed by transport with 10%.meanwhile the last and the lowest was health care, it just 3%.so down and it was the lowest enthusiast in both country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, second, so, then, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51755973566 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.415024247 43.030603864 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.666666667 112.824112599 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.3333333333 22.9334400587 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0606106353298 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396661639707 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439935268895 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396661639707 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439935268895 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.2329268293 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.62 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.3012195122 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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