Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
There is a tendency among released offenders to break a law at the earliest possible moment after dismission. This essay discusses the reasons why criminals tend to commit an offence immediately after getting free and what can be done to improve the situation.
There are two main reasons because dismissed criminals commit a crime just after getting out of jail. Firstly, the root of this issue is the fact that a prison sentence has a negative influence on gangsters rather than helping them to become decent citizens. This is because a convicted person communicates with hard-core criminals who teach them how to be more sophisticated in illegal actions. As well as this, cruel environment of a prison changes the character of a person serving a sentence. The second reason of the discussed issue is that after leaving a jail a person usually does not have a job, money, place to stay and their social contact is limited to the individuals with criminal background. Thus, they probably do not see the way out and commit another crime.
The key to solving the issue is implementation a social program, which will socialize released criminals and help them to find a job and provide with temporary residential place. Additionally, it would be useful to prepare offenders towards future life by teaching them different crafts and professions during prison term. These measures will release tension from a person and help to fit in the society. Moreover, for those who committed a minor offence, especially in case of juvenile crimes, it is reasonable to send them for community works rather than in jail. Thus, they will not to contact with subsequent offenders.
In conclusion, there are few main causes why leaving a prison large number of criminals commit a crime, among those lack of job and contact with serious offenders. The issue may be solved by implementing social programs for released and reduce communication between minor offenders with severe ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help them find
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tween minor offenders with severe ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09846153846 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75827576705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3077340082 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191942835688 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657616618102 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427208645717 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1203321263 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315645184737 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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