Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agreJioe or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, teengers need to appropriate environment to grow up. While, the idea is that kids, who belong to the poor family, they will get accurate experience to deal with difficult situation as compare to the rich family's children. Thus, i somewhat agree with this statement therefore, i will discuss my view pints in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are various reasons that i believe poor children solve problems in better way as againts other. First and foremost is that they can know the value of money. In other words, if teenagers know the situation of their family, then they will not waste money on useless things because they know that how their parents earn this money to face various problems and they also try to work hard like them sans any fear. In addition to this, poor teenagers can struggle and work hard to achieve their goal because they know that they will make a wonderful future, if they work hard and they will collect money for this.
On the other side, there are many reasons that show wealthy kids become better persons in their future. Subsequently, the richest people spend a lot of money on their kids to give accurate eduaction as well aslife style. Which is not only enhance the level of success but also they give more respect to their parents because they know that their parents do everthing for them. Apart from this, youngsters who are poor , they will commit crimes to earn money as a result they can spoil their future and their parents also face detrimental problems because of them.
To conclude, it is lucid that the rich people give all comfort to their kids, whereas other masses teach their kids to work hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, in addition, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5641025641 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30373176802 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.700709319 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.75 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0334917541868 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188487458412 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205877428313 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0295815478776 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155883643204 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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