Dear Paul,
I am writing to let you remind that last week we travelled in the same flight from Kolkata to Bangalore. Do you remember you asked me to contact you for a potential job opportunity in one of your self owned restaurant chains?
Let me explain you my job interests in detail. I am a passionate cook who appreciates and cook delicious delicacies. Cooking food and feeding people is one of the most noble profession and I aspire to become one. My love and excitement of being a chef is incomparable. I aspire to have a job as a head chef in one of your chains.
I have got 2 years of experience being a chef in multiple renowned restaurants. Currently I am working as a chef in Monday Blues. Besides doing my expected jobs, I support my chef team while head chef is not available. Being a nationally recognized chef and a happily accepted chef in many renowned restaurants , I feel that I possess all the qualities need in a head chef.
I will wait for your reply
Yours faithfully,
Sumit Das
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 79
- Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercises. What do you think about the cause of this problem? How can you address this? 73
- Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons What is your opinion about that 39
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cepted chef in many renowned restaurants , I feel that I possess all the qualities...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52717391304 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669861511 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.066229207 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166986342353 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624452835975 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816937220562 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105412172745 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951942572659 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.