In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
By developing the technology, we see numerous addition in convenient facilities more and more. Some people anticipate that there will be lower cars in the streets in future 20 years, but I do not think so. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I explore them in the following essay.
Regarding the issue of improvement in health care, it is obvious that population of humankind increase in future. Therefore, increasing people might use more private cars in the next years. For example, as I remember, there was only a few cars in each of streets in my town, 15 years ago, but now I can rarely find a parking place for my car in the same streets in my town.
Another aspect of ascending cars in future is due to development in fuel application. One of our concerns about using cars is air and sound pollution. In addition, storage of that kind of fuel is diminishing now and we are thinking for replacing them. If scientists find new way for producing energy for driving automobiles, we would make more use of them. For instance, applying green fuel, solar energy, etc. instead of fossil fuels.
Most importantly, having considered more convenient discoveries in the field of transportation systems, one might suggest that it is desirable that we use other kind of cars that help us reducing parking lots. For example, making a new car that can be fold in to a box size. It may be possible by new materials, However, it is out of imagination for us today.
In all, what drives someone to assert that in the coming year there will be more car in use that now may fall in to 3 basic categories including growing human population, substitution green fuel with fossil ones and discovering new materials and methods for producing magic cars. I hope that technology help us in finding that developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s that population of humankind increase in future. Therefore, increasing people might use...
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Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
... we use other kind of cars that help us reducing parking lots. For example, making a new...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help us in finding that developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7358490566 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77355816528 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5866340598 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5882352941 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210387682617 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629347868798 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607594098911 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122617246028 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333264014769 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.