Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having an appropriate lifestyle has an undispencable role in human's successful. There is always a belief that we should divide our time to 3 section sleep, work and enjoy. Although some people claim that this category is not suitable, but I don not think so. I agree with work routine as 5 days a week for limited hours instead of protracted working time. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, regarding the issue of 5 days work in a week, one might believe that it has less possible for doing mistake, because the pressure of work is lower in compare with long time work. To clarify, last year, when I had been worked in a factory, I forced for working from 7 a.m. until 19 p.m. for about 1 mount. Not only I did many terrific error in my reports, but also I damaged from sever headache.
An other aspect of advantages of shorter work duration in a day is proliferation in job. For instance, my brother is a prosperous manager whom has many real states and wealth. while tired, he spends much time on work due to ful-time work. Had not he tryed so much for 5 days in a week, He would not have been a formidable businessman.
Most importantly, having considered routine program, an individual may suggest that it is healthier for him/her. For example, grace to my a few hours of work in a day, I can set my time for visiting my mother each day and spend time with my family. It helps me both mentally and physically.
In all, what drives somebody to choose 5 days work to 3 days work in a week may fall in to 3 basic categories including above reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Until
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Suggestion: Another
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Suggestion: While
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for 5 days in a week, He would not have been a formidable businessman. Most...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sic categories including above reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39735099338 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55112197347 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7620348913 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335075701368 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106831099994 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818650563834 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196277525397 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274707677596 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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