You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.
In your letter:
• say how you feel about his/her performance
• give details of your music-related activities
• explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Enrique Iglesias,
I am a huge fan of your music and I am writing to congratulate you for the brilliant performance that held in Delhi on 25th September. It was simply breath taking and electrifying and I hope everyone present there would have enjoyed your performance.
I am aspiring musician and have been trained in singing for 6 years. I have a degree in singing course from Delhi University, additionally, I have also learned to play guitar. I try to attend all the concerts and moreover, I am an active group member of the band ‘music’ as a play back singer. We have participated in many singing competitions and have won many awards. I have also received the award for the best play back singer.
I am sure that you are terribly busy schedule but if you can spare some of your time to provide me mentorship on how to d better in music. I positively believe that your guidance and tips will help me to enhance my singing and music related skills
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e been trained in singing for 6 years. I have a degree in singing course from Del...
^^
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly, I have also learned to play guitar. I try to attend all the concerts and more...
^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mentorship on how to d better in music. I positively believe that your guidance a...
^
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance my singing and music related skills I hope to hearing from you soon. Yours...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my singing and music related skills I hope to hearing from you soon. Yours ...
^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours Faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88075146434 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9549740085 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199784924114 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752665215598 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072249904156 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108368945591 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793326795244 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.