You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:
• explain what will be happening
• offer your apologies in advance
• invite her to join the celebration
Dear Mr Jack,
I just thought of writing this small letter to tell you about my graduation party which will be hosting on next Saturday night at my backyard.
It would be a barbeque night with some DJ music and about 50 of my friends and family will be coming. I really work hard with my exams all year-long and finally, I got the result which I deserved. This is just a small celebration to have some fun and ease-up all the stress.
Just want to inform you early about the possible inconvenience which may incur to you during Saturday night. Probably the music and dancing would continue till late at night. Anyway, as a fun-loving neighbour, I really would like to invite you if you could join us. I hope you can sing some songs and enjoy the company of my friends. My parents and two uncles also would come and you can have a great time with them.
I will try to minimize the troubles for you. Again, if you could join us it would be a great pleasure.
Yours sincerely,
Peter Parker
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on next Saturday night at my backyard. It would be a barbeque night with some D...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, if, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5027027027 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28678676707 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5203995807 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320022305871 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110365621717 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063703410671 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189551866618 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748251431517 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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