Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university.what are the advantages and disadvantages?
It is irrefutable that some students who left school after completing school study , prefer to commute or work rather than going to university for further education and this trend has both merits as well as demerits which will be articulated meticulously in the forthcoming paragraphs.
On one hand, learning new experience from travelling is deemed to be one of the obvious benefit of such trend.To explain, when school pupils after schooling, explore new places ,they get acquainted with the culture and language of that areas which Would not only upgrade their knowledge but also lifestyle.Hence,they can learn a new experience by visiting different places after schooling.Another approach is that, they can use the money which they would earned by working,for instance, after schooling some middle class students prefer to work so that they can use earned wages for university fees or for their needs.
On the other hand,along with the advantages there are some shortcomings . firstly, the link between pupils and university would be diminished as they visit university after long time , they can not easily corporate with their teachers also.Secondly, a good businessman needs morals , cooperation,and good grades which would would only be learned by the university education.To exemplify,in India there are many people who are unemployed beacause they have no experience of work before and no knowledge about any course , consequently they just doing small work under manager in small shops.
To conclude, although there are multifarious pros and cons of such phenomenon , university students needs to be on balance in both such cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44921875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07530573929 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.65080109 49.4020404114 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.0 106.682146367 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6 7.06120827912 348% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131001531539 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801466953735 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540569365887 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793201961642 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554261063511 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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