The given diagrams illustrate about the plans of students
residence including 2 students and 1 student at Australian
University. It is cogent from these diagrams that
the rent is higher for 1 sharing room.
Overall, 2 sharing student room has some more extra
features as compared to single sharing. For example
bookself, table and chairs and cupboard are not
available in student room for one person. In addition,
the weidth of the sigle person room is almost halve
from the double sharing room(2.5 meters and 4 meters respectively).
First of all, single sharing room is 6 meters long and it has
single bade just beside the windows. Moreover,
a single study desk is followed by the bed.
Bathroom is situated at the extreme west side of the
bed and it has some kittchen stuffs, which are
microwave, stove and sink, just opposite just opposite of the
bathroom. Although, the cost of this room is $200 per week.
In contrast, the cost of the double sharing room is
$350 per week. It consists of two study desks, two beds
and a table with two chairs. Furthermore, study desks and two beds are seperated
by one long cupboard. But the TV is placed just beside of the
study desk 2. Although, this room has only 1 bathroom for 2 people.
Thus, it is clear that the rent is very cheap as compared to single
sharing for a single person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g 2 students and 1 student at Australian University. It is cogent from these diag...
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...sharing student room has some more extra features as compared to single sharing. ...
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...idth of the sigle person room is almost halve from the double sharing room2.5 meter...
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...of the sigle person room is almost halve from the double sharing room2.5 meters a...
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... bade just beside the windows. Moreover, a single study desk is followed by the b...
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...situated at the extreme west side of the bed and it has some kittchen stuffs, whi...
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Suggestion: just opposite
..., which are microwave, stove and sink, just opposite just opposite of the bathroom. Although, the cost of...
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...pposite just opposite of the bathroom. Although, the cost of this room is 00 per week. ...
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...rent is very cheap as compared to single sharing for a single person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7805907173 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43078260843 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502109704641 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8632885553 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5333333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 3.83414634146 626% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362512944678 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118795470941 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132741681599 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100720112756 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12713055279 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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