A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The world is moving more and more towards specialization. When single people in ancient times, though with less perfection, could have carried out the works of different dimensions it is almost impossible to be such generalist in the present era. In this context, moulding the education system in such a way that it prioritizes specialization from earlier days of schooling might sound relevant. However, basic understanding of almost every field of education is almost mandatory for survival in present days, let alone for specializing in some field in later days. No scholar can be a perfect physicist if he doesn’t have some knowledge from other areas such as biology, chemistry or mathematics. And nothing can do a better job to provide us with this basic level of knowledge from different dimensions than the basic national curriculum.
Many critics of the above argument might argue that teaching student with their area of interest can aid in making them able to chase the dream of their life from earlier days and national curriculum might include several subjects that one might deter that only makes education more perilous. However, at the age before we start our college education, we are not mature enough to determine that aim (dream) of our lives. The dreams that we set for ourselves are mostly forced to us. For instance, I was forced to make the dream of my life to be a doctor during my childhood but I only later found that I had no interest in studying medicine. Had I been enrolled in the curriculum that only focused on medicine from my earlier school days, I would have always regretted my decision. So, this inability among the children to decide themselves about what to study and what not to that makes studying basic national curriculum designed by the government a perfect option.
Finally, to live a decent life we need to learn some basic values, have a basic understanding of the society, and get acquainted with the basic skills of various field and all these functions are done by the basic national curriculum provided during our school days. I would never had learned, for instance, the history of my country, various people that live in different part of my country, different cultures and festival of my country had I been enrolled in the engineering course directly during my school days rather than teaching history, social studies that is included in the basic national curriculum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the basic national curriculum.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, as for, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99264705882 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70102932236 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9494865216 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116766523138 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387517660443 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477284503738 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830323137493 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356680235928 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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