The statement linking originality and old ideas is likely to be accepted in the modern world. In the modern world, almost every invention has its derivative being inferred from some ideas. So, old and lofty ideas are highly needed for a invention as a reference. By this way, it does not follow that the idea to exclude that novel innovations. Day by day technology is witnessing enormous growth by having both novel ideas and modified old ideas into consideration.
Invention is considered to be one of the greatest achievements of the mankind. While some of the inventions may be seeking novelty, may benefit many advantages for the day to day life. On the other hand, while a person, who did an invention, on the basis of old ideas, undoubtably, tends to be useful, the same way as the earlier. Both are considered to be innovations in one way or another.
Reiterating the old ideas for the betterment of humans is also considered to be original. The fact here that states reiterating old ideas, by perceiving things, in a different manner, which undoubtably, is agreed to be original. Since the idea being interpreted in a different manner, which makes it look attractive.
There are many different ideas which are left further undeveloped, due to some factors, such as funding, lack of theoretical proofs and lack of technology. With the advent of technology, such ideas can be taken as a reference, in the present day and can be further corroborated to make man’s work easier. Thereby, making a great leap for human era.
The term originality is primarily intended to the person’s creativeness in displaying the old ideas with his flavor. For example, In Shakespeare’s novel, most complex words were used. But, In recent days, there are many authors who re-wrote the same novel using simple words. However, the original credits purely goes to Shakespeare.
Thus, originality does not mean that thinking something what was thought earlier, it is likely to frame the old ideas in a creative manner to attract things.
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- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r, it is likely to frame the old ideas in a creative manner to attract things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, while, as for, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03823529412 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95194938817 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1178472357 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.65 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207547629883 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660911831459 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877383255888 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129801610896 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126306446511 0.0667264976115 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.