Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,
however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
some masses consider that the value perspective to better public health is mushrooming by plenty sport abilities.Thus,
others believe that this might half effect on body either they have need more than other things.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right way.
It is unquestionably true that health plays a vital role in human being life without health diet this is not possible to live on the earth.In addition,in these days youth have always like junk food.For instance,burger,pizza,oily,spicy,italin and so many other things.In facts,youngster can not consciousness about their home made stuff or they always curious about any new restaurants but sometimes many place could not hygienic so they have providing unhealthy food.As far as there are causing plethora diseases such as low pressure,obesity,
high pressure,anxiety and extra.
Moving towards,it is true that outdoor activities have very good impact on body because they playing a lot of games like cricket,tennis,
badminton,football,yoga,running,basketball and
so on.when teenagers could play the sport in every day.However,they can choose their career in this field and they are superb influence of their life.Otherwise,adolescent have hectic schedule in their life so further they never doing any games.After that,adults should need exercise and healthy diet.Lastly,masses can spend their
time own self than they do some exercise on the gym.Then,They can not face any illness in their life.
All said and done,I reckon,health is significant part of life.Thus,people can eat home made food either it is good on body.They are every day doing some exercise or they might always fit and health.
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- childcare is considered the most important factor for the society these days,so parents should attend parental training to give better care to these children.To what do you agree or disagree? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, so, then, thus, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62692307692 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.52130230755 2.80592935109 161% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.639143045 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.75 106.682146367 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.75 7.06120827912 379% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126787690262 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927516508368 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529710250097 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524637001492 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492046324757 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.6 13.0946893788 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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