You have organised to go on holiday with your friend. However , you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday
Explain why you must change your plans.
Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Frank
It has been so long since we last were in touch and I have not forget all the wonderful times we spend together last year.
I really look forward to this summer vacation to Australia since we haven’t been hang out together for almost 1 year. I did a lot of researches on the tourist attractions we can visit together since this will be the first time for me to visit Australia. I even brought a swim suit for going to the beach.
However, last week I was notified by the doctor that my cousin got an epidemic at her school. Since I am her only relative live in the same city with her. I have to look after her for the upcoming two weeks.
I am sorry for the inconveniences I brought to you. Would it be possible if you stick to the original plan and I will catch up with you later in Australia if my cousin get better? I can change my air ticket at no cost and fly to Australia in late June.
Let me know if you agree with my alternative plan.
All the best
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...ce we last were in touch and I have not forget all the wonderful times we spend togeth...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e first time for me to visit Australia. I even brought a swim suit for going to t...
^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y cousin got an epidemic at her school. Since I am her only relative live in the same...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h my alternative plan. All the best Bill
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21761658031 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33976695053 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9930549209 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106918804783 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436564017261 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477042652255 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679126042964 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584327442121 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.