Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Over the past few years there is tremendous increase in high risk sports mainly sky diving, even though it's admittedly popular among youth. However, risk factor the game carries may leads to death.In my opinion this should be immediately banned and going forward government must take measures in stopping extreme sports.
First of all, people became passionate and enjoying the risky adventures. Additionally, they feel it's fun part of life. Although, it gives happiness and enjoyment to peaks.For instance, If right initiations and certified trainers are not available while diving. that causes very serious injurious, some times may result in loss of life.when you don't know the basic of these task and your health condition is not up to the mark, you have to completely avoid this features.
On the other hand, skiing is not as much dangerous as diving.As long as it is done in right places on the particular points, For example, i went on skiing when i am in my last vacations, I felt like that was the best part happened in my trip. it all started with one good trainee, he helped me in all the aspects and given me maps and right suit, i enjoyed it to the most.Furthermore, I got to feel the scenic beauty where we can only find it in few snowpoints.
In conclusion, Either it has some advantages we have to consider it breakdowns and how it may affect the persons mental and physical ability. I agree with the author's view that the extreme sports has very dangerous part involved and authorities must ban this and encourage other fun sports which adds low risk
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79853479853 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63915283158 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652014652015 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9003395576 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190251063865 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578208206278 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740797893748 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105374801106 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537858484736 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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