You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
Dear Jack,
How’re you buddy? Actually, through this letter I would like to invite you on a surprise party I through for my African friend Lena.
Although, she was topper of our class and a winner of a scholarship 2018, I noticed her performance in class is going downward these days. She told me about her birthday celebration in her country with their family and crying to remember those moments.
To get her out of this situation I want to through a surprise party on her birthday. This party will held on Wilson Hotel near to our institution on 10th Nov. It starts at 10 o’clock and continue till midday. If you’ll free before this time then you can join me at 9 o’clock to make some arrangements.
She is found of Indian sweet dish Rice pudding. As you’re are very good cook. You could bring this to feel her jubilant. I hope you will also enjoy this party along with us.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... party on her birthday. This party will held on Wilson Hotel near to our institution...
^^^^
Line 21, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...along with us. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75757575758 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62008909206 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684848484848 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6820276973 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3846153846 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219565677384 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770441612062 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570597336637 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139363061451 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049974315293 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.