some people believe that young people bring more benefits to an enterprise. Other consider old people bring more benefits.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
Many section of society thinks that youngster bring more gain to an organization, however, other people believe that golden agers have an advantage in achieving high financial benefits for the firm. The following paragraphs would shed light on both visions before making final note with my personal perspective with suitable examples.
To being with, young ones are full of energy and ready to unleash themselves in corporate world after completing their higher education. They always want to learn new skills and want to upgrade themselves to do well in their first job. Hence, they work hard towards accomplishment of achieving targets on time as to gather more acknowledgment and recognition in firm. To illustrate this, a recent survey in India state that 80% of young generation prefer to work overtime as compared to rest of the employees in IT Industry. Beside this, young adult can work for longer hours to complete task therefore it can bring greatest success for the workplace.
On the other hand, elder people have richer and deep knowledge of industry and have vast experience in decision-making due to this they are more accurate in making quick decisions in short time. Consequently, senior people in organization can give valuable inputs in complex situation which can be very beneficial for companies in long term. For instance, 85% startups in India are successfully running only because of person with an average age of 50 working for them. Furthermore, they have larger financial resources and more social network for support in their idea.
To sum up, I strongly opine that older employees can turn age into their advantages for company due to better social contacts, greater decision-making techniques and vast knowledge of an industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many sections'.
Suggestion: Many sections
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Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...pective with suitable examples. To being with, young ones are full of energy and...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bring the greatest'.
Suggestion: bring the greatest
...hours to complete task therefore it can bring greatest success for the workplace. On the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in short, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24295774648 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82334430435 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.201719333 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180407855572 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610325344891 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705540540815 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108242067536 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748156815723 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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