You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter:
- correct the information in the article
- explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear sir,
I am writing to bring your attention to a significant error in your recent article about the festival in Kutch.
The mistakes relate to the dates of the Ran Festival. It is stated several times in the article that festival will be open until New Year’s Day, when in fact it is due to finish earlier than this, on 23rd of October.
People who read your magazine and decide to visit the festival in the last week of December are going to be sorely disappointed. Your error could spoil Diwali excursions or a family vacation for many tourists, and this could lead to bad publicity and complaint for the city.
I hope you will rectify this problem by publishing a correction in the next issue of your magazine and on the home page of your website. It is vital that you give accurate information to the readers who follow your travel advice.
I trust you will act quickly to correct the mistake.
Yours faithfully,
Milan Desai.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81547619048 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47561806571 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1122057886 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229092201956 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898372102433 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585693872864 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115607230836 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707456876022 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.