It is important to keep your old friends than t is to make new friends. Do you agree, or disagree with this statament. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your idea.
As human is a scocial creature, companion is paramount in the life of the people. the only things matter in the friendship is their empathy. the question "Did the old friend is more important than new friend or vice versa?" is controversial in nature as effrective friendship can be happened in anywhere or any time in the life of the people. however, to choose which one is better to keep, I believe new friends will be more important in the life of the people as on changing circumstances old friends hardly with us and other hand, making the new friend always open the possibilty to have the big circle.
we all know the dynamic aspects of the life; old friends hardly with us. Each people have different ambition, desire and destination. Rarely, this factors congrous with the our friends. unfortunately, people have to seperate their older friends when they have to pursue their destination and dream. In that case, people will become alone if they only focus on keeping their old friends. In fact this time, ability to make new friends is need of the person's life. new friends not give you company in your new environment but also provide the essentail help that you need in your life. For instance, I have with my friends for ten years; we shareed our feelings in our school time. Then time have come to seperate him and me as I want to pursue in the field of science while he wanted to be manager. At that time, my skill of making new friends helped me a lot to draw my all tension and anxiety of the new place. In addition, I was helped often time i3wth the help of them. however, again the time had come to say good bye and process of making new freinds goes on and on.
Furthermore, abilty of making new friends improve your social skill as well. Certainly, this habits improve the social cicle of the person. On increasing social skill, people chance of getting help from other is also certain. Let me tell you, I have one of the good experience that making freinds paid me well. one time, I have met a guy in the coffee shop; he was compete strange to me. but, some way we got friends. After couple of years, I have to go in the chitwan, unfortunately, I have arrived chitwan 2 am due to some traffic jam. anxiety was running in ny vein as i had no relatives in their and no hotel was opened as well. fortunately, the guy of the coffee shop was lived their and i called him. Thankfully, he was there and ready to pick me up in that horrendous sitaution. Thus, sometimes it is benefical for people to keep on making a new friends.
In conclusion, people do not with their friends all the time and habit of making new friends is always essentail to be happy and get helped in difficult situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46987951807 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47937005112 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4683971131 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10714285714 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248449363163 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684994350122 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734073297997 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163509918347 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398560606492 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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