The reading and the lecture are both about Chevalier’s memoir accuracy.
The author of the reading feels that Chevalier’s memoir is not true and wondered how he remembered everything. The lecture challenges the claims made by the author. He is of the opinion that the memoir is real and exact.
To begin with, the author argues that Chevalier was not rich unlike what he said in memoir. The article mentions that he borrowed money. The specific argument is challenged by the lecture. He claims that even though he borrowed the money, he had a good reason for it. He is rich that is true. When he sold his property he couldn’t get money, so he had to loan first.
Secondly, the writer suggests how could he remember every detail in his conversation with Voltaire a famous writer. In the article, it is says that Chevalier remembered every that took place a long time ago. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that he already wrote their conversation as soon as they finished.
Finally, the author posits that he gives a bribery for prison officer when he was in prison. Moreover, it is stated in the article that in his memoir he escaped the hole in the prison. but most people think he gave bribery. In contrast, the lecture’s positions is he didn’t give the bribery. He notes that it wasn’t easy to get out of the prison by bribing at that time. Additionally in the document a hole was found on the ceiling of the jail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... wondered how he remembered everything. The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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Suggestion:
... is challenged by the lecture. He claims that even though he borrowed the money, ...
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Suggestion:
...urer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that he already wrote their conversation...
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Suggestion: But
...moir he escaped the hole in the prison. but most people think he gave bribery. In c...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... of the prison by bribing at that time. Additionally in the document a hole was found on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76171875 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77111203123 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5587964811 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1578947368 110.228320801 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211356580606 0.272083759551 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071664295984 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051580062623 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129232296999 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126872032182 0.0443174109184 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.3589403974 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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