Water used for different purposes in six areas
The pie charts compare the percentage of water used for three main purposes (industrial , agricultural and domestic use) in six different areas of the world.
Overall, the most striking fact to emerge from the charts is four countries especially Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America uses more than 70% of water for agricultural use. Whereas, Europe and North America uses almost 50% of water for industrial purposes.
According to the pie charts Central Asia, Africa and South East Asia use water maximum for agricultural use with percentages of 88%, 84% and 81% respectively compared to South america at 71%. The percentage of water used for agricultural purpose by North America and Europe is 39% and 32% correspondingly.
In terms of industrial use of water, Europe and North America shares about 50 percentage of total while South America and South East Asia contributes almost 10%. Africa and Central Asia uses as less as 7% and 5% accordingly.
Finally, in the category of water use for domestic purpose, South America,Europe and North America utilise around 15% while other countries use less than 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Suggestion: , Europe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21195652174 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77448459931 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494565217391 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2132101824 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37719780685 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214693291789 0.103423049105 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142097738383 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265236685949 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15300760941 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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