It is important that we maintain and protect the beautiful building of the past, even if it is expensive for countries to do so.
Do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The Historical building and the beautiful places of the past are the reflection of our history, they help us to understand and respect people of who lived in different eras and traditions. Some denizens believe that it necessary to protect and preserve the monuments and conventional places of the country. This essay will argue the needs of preserving and restoring the archaeological place and building of the country.
To embark on, the traditional places help to attract worldwide tourist and archaeologists who want to study past remains of the nation. This helps in the inflow of the foreign currency and thus, contributes in the economic development of the country. This has led to the development of the tourism industry and eventually created more job opportunities for the people. For example, the Taj Mahal in Agra has attracted a lot of foreigners from all over the world and this creates a lot of employment opportunities as tourist guides, travel agencies and so on.
Furthermore, the long-established builds and archaeological ruins helps to maintain the cultural and traditional aspects of the territory. Preservation of the old buildings play an important cultural role in cultivating the pride of the heritage and past making us unique in the world. It helps the community to understand the period of glory and struggle of our predecessors and helps to protect the culture and customs of the country
On the contrary, the government has to allocate a huge amount of money to protect and preserve the monuments eventually it puts a pressure on the citizens who will have to pay high taxes in order to reconstruct the monuments. Additionally, most the of area of the land is occupied by the archaeological places, in order to build new buildings and houses, forest areas are cleared and this affect the environment of the territory
To conclude, I strongly agree that the long established places and monuments are the roots of our beliefs and religion and it is mandatory for the administration to safeguard and conserve these attractive locations and thus maintain the aesthetic and artistic view of the country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sthetic and artistic view of the country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, as to, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14857142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0952564102 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.412571926 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.818181818 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8181818182 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150009867088 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553983076727 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254182682051 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781157291585 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016195017456 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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