The usage of fossil fuels has become more pervasive in the world. At the meantime, some countries persuade their companies to use clean energy. In my opinion, replacing renewable energy has a very positive effect on all aspects.
On the bright side, one of the most basic advantages of alternative energy is being unlimited of their sources. Obviously, solar and wind energy have been used for many years and it could be used for millions of years. In addition, exchanging of fossil fuels with clean energy could be a leading factor for decreasing electricity bills. For example, industrial factories need a lot of electricity to produce their products like cars or digital technology, so that they have to pay astronomical bills. Last but not least, what could be the major benefit of solar energy is the reduction of air pollution. For instance, energy from the sun can be used to heat or people vehicles without generating carbon dioxide or methane gas.
On the dark side, the initial cost of purchasing the solar or wind system is fairly high. Accordingly, you should pay for panels, batteries, turbines, installation, etc, and solar panels need space to install on the ground. Furthermore, these energies are weather dependent. A good example of it is, during the night or rainy days solar cells cannot collect the energy from the sun so that this type of energy is not available anywhere in the world.
In conclusion, despite some disadvantages of clean energy, in my opinion, there are more advantages in the use of renewable energy to be considered by counties a proper replacement for the non-renewable source of energy.
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 61
- More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive trend? 73
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being What factors contribute to job satisfaction How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers 74
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. they have just sent you some photos of your holiday.write a letter to your friends . say thank them for the photos and for the holidayexplain why you did not write earlier and invit 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, you should pay for panels, batteries, turbines, installation, etc, and solar p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01831501832 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76858143055 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1546447507 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198130725572 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669753913387 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433184719149 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128140357517 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475894132266 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.