SHARING INFORMATION
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Knowledge is power.People can spread their comprehension according to their wish.However there will be some situations at where we should restrict ourselves in doing that because sharing complete information can not only reveal your ideas but also paves the way to destroy the world class things we thought of achieving in the near future.
For an instance if the knowledge you shared is useful for the society there will not be any problem but if something goes wrong you are the first person to be condemned for the incorrect thing .It does not mean that sharing data which is related to research in the science field is not necessary but proper check should be there before sharing the most confidential things.
Now a days various facilities are available to share the information and it is quite a bit difficult to conceal the business data with the technological advancement. Although people are warned not to share their passwords with unknown people they are too innocent that they share their personal information regarding trade secrets.Most of them are facing several consequences right after passing on their valuable information.
Even though some information should not be sent to others there are numerous situations where sharing our knowledge plays a key role in building up the careers of several students.These days passing o the information could save peoples lives. To illustrate that social media is an outstanding platform where we can share our views, so a right celebrity can share the news which can lead to enhancement in the society's enrichment.
To conclude this thing I can obviously say that there are pros and cons for sharing the information however ,sharing the right information to the right person at the right time should be verified before sharing.</span><br>
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- Some people say that all secondary and higher secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this argument? 56
- percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- SHARING INFORMATION 61
- children ,money, importance 73
- children taking decisions 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31186440678 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25332967569 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3095202356 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.857142857 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.1428571429 20.7667163134 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424241136626 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223942149955 0.084324248473 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737886557873 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255269002028 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903789371855 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.