SHARING INFORMATION
Knowledge is power. People can spread their comprehension according to their wishes.However, there will be some situations where we should restrict ourselves in doing that because sharing complete information can not only reveal your ideas but also paves the way to destroy the world-class things we thought of achieving in the near future.
For instance if the knowledge you shared is useful for the society there will not be any problem but if something goes wrong you are the first person to be condemned for the incorrect thing. It does not mean that sharing data that is related to research in the science field is not necessary but a proper check should be there before sharing the most confidential things.
Nowadays various facilities are available to share the information and it is quite a bit difficult to conceal the business data with technological advancement. Although people are warned not to share their passwords with unknown people they are too innocent that they share their personal information regarding trade secrets. Most of them are facing several consequences right after passing on their valuable information.
Even though some information should not be sent to others there are numerous situations where sharing our knowledge plays a key role in building up the careers of several students. These days passing o the information could save people's lives. To illustrate that social media is an outstanding platform where we can share our views, so a right celebrity can share the news which can lead to enhancement in the society's enrichment.
To conclude this thing I can obviously say that there are pros and cons for sharing the information however , sharing the right information to the right person at the right time should be verified before sharing.
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| 2020-09-14 | sonia 7022 | 56 | view |
| 2019-11-10 | saipreetham | 61 | view |
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| 2019-04-13 | Nikunj Patel | 89 | view |
- Some people say that all secondary and higher secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this argument? 56
- children ,money, importance 73
- percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- SHARING INFORMATION 61
- SHARING INFORMATION 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...comprehension according to their wishes.However, there will be some situations where we...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ss data with technological advancement. Although people are warned not to share their pa...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing on their valuable information. Even though some information should not be sent to ...
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Line 17, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cons for sharing the information however , sharing the right information to the ri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19243986254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77618506391 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5210498777 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.363636364 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436902483958 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169630637741 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110537155364 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261797172673 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883833630856 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.